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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

Emily... Wow! This is so breathtakingly brilliant I am left dazed in tearful speechlessness...the emotion in Mira's voice! Your faultless narration from "But then, I felt the pattern begin to shift." to "Grief rose in waves, sharp and bitter, flooding every hollow place inside me." was so credible I felt I was there watching in fear and horror with her!

This is masterful magic in its most finest artful form - I am awe, I can't wait for the final part!

A truly beautiful and original story - so well done lovely 💛✨xx

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Sara Santa Clara's avatar

WOW Emily, WOW

I listened to this rather than read it and I have to say I was breathless by the end.

Brilliant job - can't wait for part 3.

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